Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Relics

Below is likely the first commercial I ever wrote. It's from an assignment I vaguely remember us having in 3rd grade. The teacher wanted us to pick an item we really enjoyed and write a commercial about it. It's an interesting look at my style then.

Transcript: "Where I live, I used to have a breakfast problem. My mother's breakfast I didn't like. My father's breakfast I didn't like either. I just couldn't seem to find a breakfast to suit me. But now I have a breakfast that is just right...New Maple Brown-Sugar Flavored Instant Quaker Oatmeal. It almost takes longer to say than it does to make. But it's the first hot cereal a kid can really warm up to. Please excuse any mistakes, this is only my first commercial."

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